iTwinkletv (July 9, 2008 at 8:48 am)

You, my friend, get a gold star.

Adom (July 9, 2008 at 8:07 am)

I love the visual style of this. Like Sky Captain. You're instantly in another world where normal rules don't apply. I think calling it "episode 1" when it seems more like a teaser trailer is throwing people who are expecting a deeper plot. Keep `em coming. Once everything is fleshed out I think there's a real audience for this. As for it being sexist: I don't see how a woman in charge, studying and working is sexist. Sexy maybe. But not sexist.

Crazyfoxeye (July 7, 2008 at 11:29 am)

I saw the lady with pink hair and the guy who said "hi" at the end at AX

squattingturnip (July 6, 2008 at 8:10 am)

The visuals are very, very nice - and I am referring to the visual style, not the actors - but the audio really kinda makes it sound like a student film. The rest of the elements are there, but the sound really breaks the illusion of sex and style that you seem to want to portray. Still, you're most of the way there. Good work.

Adamaverage (July 2, 2008 at 4:23 am)

lol, nice intro scene.

oclivingiseasy (July 1, 2008 at 8:30 pm)

Sexy. I like the style a lot. Would like to understand the plot a little better tho. Unlike the comment below, I don't think you need dialogue, per se, to do this, but a lil more direction might really pull it all together. Has almost a comic book, Sin City-esque, vibe. Nice! Look forward to more =) Thanks for puttin' it out there!

InsZod (July 1, 2008 at 8:26 pm)

hey this is freaking awesome... i love that it looks like sincity... ... i don't hav too much experience with this but nice tease.. girl amazing... so Justin when r u going to introduce me?.. awesome job again cuz, can't wait to c more.. ur cuz javi

Klarkkent1976 (July 1, 2008 at 7:31 pm)

Great work guys. This truly is a teaser though. I'm looking forward to some story and content. I wanna see what these characters got and what they get into. I hope episode two can dish it out. As for the lovers and the haters you will always have both. The best part of free will is if you don't like it, just turn it off, tune out or make something better. I'll be waiting for episode two guys. Great work.

jallenholt (July 1, 2008 at 8:35 am)

Ugh.. this is pretty awful. If you're just trying to sell the sex angle, why the old guy and that ridiculous face he makes when she gets close to him? Incoherent and uninspired.

Ghost0226 (July 1, 2008 at 3:02 am)

First, the dialogue is virtually non-existent. True, it's only a couple minute long video, however, I've taken more out of a 30 second TV commercial than I did from this. All we know about the main character is she likes to wear lingerie, ride high performance motorcycles, tease old men, and then show up to work in the morning. This is an example of relying solely on sexual appeal to attract an audience. Is the director a direct descendant of Freud by any chance?